英文作文:The Dream Fight 好作文分享

There was an owner whose name was Snowheart. Of course, for parents and teachers, Snowheart was not her real name. They call her Elsa. The Elsa from Frozen.EnH中文字网

She has two extremely cheeky turtles.EnH中文字网

The first one is called Lazyshy.EnH中文字网

The second, smaller one is Crazythorn.EnH中文字网

It’s always driving her crazy. This small turtle has three sharp and pointy spikes on his back.EnH中文字网

It was 一二:零零 at the middle of midnight one evening when the two turtles drifted asleep at last. They were dreaming in the same dream. They were so greedy that they started to fight to get more food from the other.EnH中文字网

First of all, Crazythorn was a good swimmer. His pads were fascinating. They each looked like a duck’s foot. It was always difficult to see where he was because he swamims like a dolphin. He swam around Lazyshy like a lightning bolt. Lazyshy felt dizzy but muttered: “I need a stone, a humongous stone. Come on! Where is it?” Suddenly he spotted one. He stretched out his tiny paws. Unluckily, Crazythorn didn’t trip. Lazyshy reached the stone and hit his companion right onit at the moving thorns.EnH中文字网

CRASH! SPLASH!EnH中文字网

Crazythorn was finally stuck.EnH中文字网

“Uh-oh,” thought Crazythorn.EnH中文字网

The stone was widish with a sword on top. He felt a surge of panic. If he managed to wriggle away from the stone. The sword would be still on his back. The stone felt like a poisonous stone. Cautiously, Lazyshy grabbed the sword and lifted the stone. Crazythorn was to do the same thing when he felt something heavy zig zagging across his back.EnH中文字网

“Oh dear,” Crazythorn murmured to himself.EnH中文字网

“Why am I always so stupid?”EnH中文字网

The vicious-looking Lazyshy was on top of him with the sword zig zagging across his shell. He tried to shake Lazyshy off but he couldn’t. He began to sob. He’ll never get to eat the yummy, juicy food or maybe even die. Lazyshy was a good balancer.EnH中文字网

When he was about to say that he would give up on the challenge, the feeling stopped. Lazyshy jumped down and the sword vanished.EnH中文字网

“How did you feel when you were on my back?” whispered Crazythorn. “You were a wobbly tightrope,” Lazyshy admitted.EnH中文字网

“You won so you eat it,” Crazythorn urged.EnH中文字网

“No, let’s share.”EnH中文字网

Crazythorn was too shocked to say anything.EnH中文字网

“Are you sure?” Crazythorn double-checked. If he hadn’t asked that he might have a battle again because he might have heard it wrong.EnH中文字网

“Yes, I’m fine.”EnH中文字网

“Ok,” Crazythorn accepted happily.EnH中文字网

And they ate merrily ever after.EnH中文字网

PLUCK!EnH中文字网

“AHHHHHHH……Emergency, emergency. There’s a poop trail leading to Lazyshy who is still fast asleep.”EnH中文字网

The End.EnH中文字网

A. What an interesting story, Elsa. I am so impressed with the way that you incorporate the words and phrases in the list and I am also impressed about your invention of a story that has such two different personalities in it. It helps of course that I especially like tortoises.EnH中文字网

It is clear that you are becoming a very talented writer. I am very proud of you!EnH中文字网

CheersEnH中文字网

FrancesEnH中文字网

梦中的战斗EnH中文字网

我是一个名叫雪心的主人。当然,对于家长和老师来说,雪心不是她的真名。他们叫她艾尔莎。《冰雪奇缘》中的艾尔莎。 她有两只非常厚脸皮的乌龟。 第一个叫懒人。第二个较小的是Crazythorn。EnH中文字网

它总是让她发疯。这只小的背上有三个尖锐的刺。一天晚上午夜 一二 :零零 ,两只终于睡着了。他们在同一个梦中做梦。他们是如此贪婪,以至于他们开始为从对方那里获得更多的食物而斗争。首先,Crazythorn是一个游泳好手。他的垫子很迷人。他们每个人都看起来像一只鸭子的脚。总是很难看出他在哪里,因为他像海豚一样游泳。他像闪电一样在懒乌龟周围游来游去。懒乌龟感到头晕目眩,但喃喃地说:“我需要一块石头,一块巨大的石头。加油!它在哪里?忽然,他发现了一个。他伸出他的小爪子。不幸的是,Crazythorn没有绊倒。懒乌龟伸手走到石头上,正好击中了他的同伴在移动的荆棘上。EnH中文字网

崩溃!水溅!Crazythorn终于被困住了。哎呀,”Crazythorn想。石头很狰狞,上面有一把剑。他感到一阵恐慌。如果他设法从石头上扭动起来。那把剑还在他的背上。这块石头感觉像一块有毒的石头。懒乌龟小心翼翼地拿起剑,举起了石头。Crazythorn也要做同样的事情,当他感觉到一个沉重的扭曲在他的背上晃来晃去。“哦,亲爱的,”Crazythorn喃喃自语。“为什么我总是这么笨?”长相凶恶的懒乌龟趴在它身上,剑在壳上蜿蜒曲折。他试图甩掉懒乌龟,但它做不到。它开始抽泣。它觉得它永远不会吃到美味多汁的食物,甚至可能死去。懒乌龟是一个很好的平衡者。EnH中文字网

当它正要说它要放弃挑战时,这种感觉停止了。懒乌龟跳了下来,剑消失了。 “你趴在我背上时感觉如何?”Crazythorn低声说。“你是一根摇摇晃晃的钢丝绳,”懒乌龟承认。“你赢了,所以你吃了它,”Crazythorn催促道。“不,让我们分享一下。Crazythorn太震动了,什么也说不出来。“你确定吗?”疯狂荆棘仔细检查。如果它没有问它可能会再次进行战斗,因为它可能听错了。“是的,我很好。”“好吧,”Crazythorn愉快地接受了。从那以后,它们吃得很开心。掉了!“啊啊啊紧急情况,紧急情况。有一条便便小路通向仍然快睡着的Lazyshy。EnH中文字网

结束。EnH中文字网

指导老师评语:多么有趣的故事,艾尔莎。我对你将单词和短语纳入列表中的方式印象深刻,我也对你发明了一个有如此两种不同个性的故事印象深刻。 很明显,你正在成为一个非常有才华的作家。我为你感到骄傲!EnH中文字网